I have… mixed feeling about this one.
First of all, you really should see it live and in person. Trust me – the colours of her hair have a nice depth, and her skin tones are far more delicate than what you see here. For some reason, WordPress just makes this one seem garish.
But wonky colours aside, I’m not sure about proceeding this way. I can look at this painting and know exactly where I stitched stuff together (and I will always see that!), and don’t get me started on how long it took to find all the right elements! Even when I got the right shoulder and head pose (and the hair!), it didn’t always follow that the shadows matched. In fact, finding all the reference images ended up taking much longer than the actual painting!
What I like about this painting:
- the fact that it’s an ORIGINAL work. I promise: there ain’t nobody nowhere walking around looking like this!
What I like less about the painting:
- I couldn’t find very hi-res references, so it feels a little “fudged and slurred through the difficult passages”. But more than that, I started the painting with a sense of “why bother?”, and that’s just not the way to do it…
- I will always and forever look at this painting and wonder “Do all the elements coalesce? Can anyone tell it’s a Franken-painting?”
What I learned through this process:
- coming up with original ideas is HARD. And SCARY.
- and ultimately, that is why some artists are strictly representational. If it’s not directly in front of them, they won’t paint it.
- I miss the zen factor of painting from internet images.
What I MIGHT change…
- Her hair. I liked my initial colour layout and just kept it that way, but now I wonder: does it look too unfinished?
5 thoughts on “Painting for September 27”
I think you should leave it alone. It looks perfect to me and reminds me of my nieces. If I sold some work, I would hire you to do one of them. This style fits their generation.
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Oh and I love the touch of red.
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Thank you, Suzan! I guess one of the hardest things about being an artist is knowing when to stop! I can’t say that I’m %100 certain that I’ll never touch it again, but I promise that I’ll have a good long think about it. 😉
I like her hair, but it does look unfinished. Sort of a punk look. But it works. Love you list, and honest appraisal.
Thanks for the feedback! I tried painting over her hair in Photoshop just to see what it would look like, and I’m seriously considering taking the plunge and repainting her hair. One must tread carefully – there’s no “Undo” with painting! 😉